Initial Ideas

 2nd:

The entire film is based on following round the life of a suicidal team. We learn their every move and learn their tricks and meet their enemies.

The opening scene:

Starts of revealing the setting which is a church, we immediately focus on one particular man straight away surrounded by other people. We notice a ticking bomb behind his back, when the timer reaches 10 seconds police and FBI’s crash into the church with guns and we focus back onto the bomb once it has reached 1 second and the scene suddenly ends showing the title of the film with a black out screen.  

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Feedback:

Starting with the positive comments. 

-Liked the idea of the ticking time bomb as it creates so much suspense. 

-Loved the location of beginning in the church as it is a holy place, so it contrasted well with the bomb. 

-Liked the idea that the audience don't know whether the bomb has been disabled in time or if the bomb has gone off. 

-Correct genre, you know immediately it is a thriller.    

-Perfect length to grip the audience. 

Improvements. 

-Did not understand why the man was in the church, as if he was part of a suicidal team they would have gone for a much more larger venue, so think about why the characters are there. 

-Terrorist does not work as they normally cause mass destruction. 

-Everything you film must lasts the amount of seconds that the timer is going down in. 

-I could a man tied to the bomb hidden underneath the Church trying to escape, then having the contrast of a choir singing above.